Alan Keane showed me the proposal he wrote for me, and I have to say it was a glowing proposal; fair play to him for putting in so much time to it. Had another tutorial with David Brancaleone regarding the proposal; he went through it with a fine tooth comb, fair play to him too, as it was in his own time. David suggested a lot of changes, which I was in the process of doing, when Alan asked me for the proposal to send off. As a result, the proposal was not as 'sharp' as it could have been. Worked until nine filling out the other application form.